Analysis of Feedback from Pitch

Today we received the feedback from our classmates regarding our film. The feedback that I recieved from my pitch was very critical but in a positive way. I was able to look at others sample scene and give feedback to them as well as recieve feedback from the other members of my class. Below is a picture of two people writing feedback on our film. they were again very critical but we can use this the benefit our production of the film.